in the beginning of the video was a trailer and it was very fast, the A-roll was correct on the right side, the captions on the video was so distracted and annoyed to the eye, they could stand up only with the A-roll defining without the captions. The 5 shots 10 seconds method was on point, extreme close up, close up, medium shot, everything I want, but over the shoulder shot was not really quite good enough, it was so high near their head. The music was so loud which result a noise, they could go with the natural sound only. The story was very touching and straight forward to the heart. The quality of the video was good. The third mistake I realized was they did not have title nor credit.